Today was a short day. I revised 2,500 words, full of repetition and not in a good order. I got it 1,500 better words. I removed repetition, I reorganized it, and I cut things into a Word file. I then printed it. Tomorrow, I will review on paper with a green pen. (I find there is a moment in the writing, where a print out, with a pen, on paper offers a different speed. The medium offers a way to slow down.